Army

November 23rd, 2009

Contemplating about whether doing all the “parts” he wanted might just not be possible. Focusing on just the second part which would involve going back to the camp and take 2 more photo sessions. Is the photo of the shaved head solders enough? He doesn’t want to try and create a video that he’s never done before.

Critique
William Pace: What’s the point of going back down and taking more photos of heads?
Neil Jones: I want to make better technical photos and thus making better choices.

Timothy Druckrey: Every part being separate from every other part is a cop-out. Everything is a linked product. MFA is a right of passage, don’t be hesitant of showcasing a work in progress. Don’t retreat back, all the stages matter and the whole concept needs to accompany the minimum of part 1 or with the other components.